SS. 2357. Finger Cut - Rajya Lakshmi - Nursing - GrandMasterClass - Fantastic Feedback
- GrandMasterClass
- Mar 10, 2022
- 7 min read
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INTERLOCUTOR (71%), NURSE (29%)
IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 0:00 Okay Rajalakshmi you can start now Good afternoon nurse NR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 0:10 Please be happy Have a seat.IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 0:12 Thank you very much nurseNR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 0:19 nurses working in this community health centreIG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 0:23 you can call me Maggie because my name is Margaret Thatcher.NR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 0:30 Okay Miss Mr.IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 0:35 Mrs. Maggie, and I'm the mother of this child. And I have come here regarding my son. He's six years old. AndNR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 0:46 okayplease try not to worry. I mean I place we will do the best for us. Could you tell me more accident?IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 1:04 Yeah, actually what happened? I kept I did not notice my son come into the kitchen. I completed the cutting and I kept the kitchen knife. It was under the kitchen table itself and my son cut with it. His finger right this finger won't stop bleeding and I am panicking about it. The My child is afraid of doctors and I have to weigh this consideration and about about his finger to be fine.NR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 1:38 Okay, Mr. TTSA you're doing the right thing coming to the hospital are you engaged for the documentation?IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 1:52 My son's name is Charles Charles six years old.NR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 2:02 Okay, okay. Can I assess his finger?IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 2:06 Yeah, definitely nurseNR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 2:10 Okay, thank you for giving opportunity. My name is Maggie. Okay from my assessment at SuperOcean Mrs. Maggie I do really understand it's quite difficult to see newer change the neck pain there is nothing to be alarmed and it's bleeding a lot and don't worry it is minor karthi he will clean his wound and apply the antiseptic cream applied for the pressure bandage it will control for the bleeding How does that sound smile?IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 2:43 That's very fine nurse and I don't know how and I don't know how I'm going to manage this situation and I believe that my son should have stitches don't you think the cat looks deepness my child is in pain and I'm worried do something now why don't you give some teachers for thatNR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 3:15 to be given a gift for the soldiers it will be my injury it will be when we are leaving the pressure applying the prison managers automatically with the bleeding levers stop okay. Okay No need to be ready for that. Okay. The only change it will take for it is to only five to six days it will take for the healing of the full recovery of the wound. Okay. Proper healing recovery as soon as possibleIG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 3:52 yes, yes of courseNR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 4:01 don't worry about that.IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 4:03 Okay. Okay.NR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 4:08 Today's using two days. Good as he can use for his like, because the pain will be present we will provide for the painting pillars and we will do for the dressing and it will not cause any infections. It is clear for you Maggie.IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 4:26 Yes, nurse. It's very clear. And I want to ask you what can be okay. Done for my son's finger. Because you know, my son is a right handed person and I'm doubtful whether he can use his hand properly again. And what about the scarring, really the scar be always there.NR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 4:51 presence will be subside after few days when we are applying the creams and all it will be subsided no need to be ready for that. It is a minor injury only okay is it clear Maggie we have to take a nicely sing just I will I will show you how to take care about that and then you can do you can follow for a Komatsu.IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 5:21 Okay, that's very fine but what about the response Yeah, I want to tell you I cannot be 24 hours of taking care of myself because you know I'm a busy person I can't I can't spend every minute of my day watching himNR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 5:46 I would like to invoice youNR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 5:55 movies is really curious at and we need to take care for them enough pieces and the items keep away from the children so we can prevent further some of the injuries and whenever you are going for a job or you a busy person, you have to take care of me as we help cook these things. That sauce MaggieIG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 6:23 Yeah, that's really fine nurse was very much thank you very much nurse Have a nice day.NR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 6:30 Yeah, no need to be ready for that Maggie, she will recover rapidly within five to six days. And she will the whole will be here and you have to follow for dressing properly.IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 6:42 Okay, Okay, nice. No, I'll give you some feedback. Speedy Okay. I'll give you some feedback regarding your session for now, you said now, this is Rajalakshmi you have taken the finger cut roleplay card is a Community Health Centre and here is a six year old child son and then fine right. You will have said please be have your seat. You can say take your seat or please have your seat or please be seated. You cannot say please be have your seat. Okay, please be seated. Please have a seat and how to get there. Then next, the next one is Rajalakshmi you have said there is nothing to be alarm. There is nothing to be alarmed. Edie is missing. So theythey don't speak anything. Let me speak afterwards when I ask you, you open your mouth otherwise, just listen. Because I'm giving the feedback. You're obstructing me. How does that sounds? You say How does that sound? You have to say how does that sound? No s does he is already there he is so again sounds you cannot say so, how does that sound? And next one is fourth one is a confusion gender confusion. Sometimes you say mister sometimes you say Mrs. Maggie Margaret Thatcher Mother, I am telling you still you are saying Mr. Maggie and again connecting it to Mrs. Maggie I don't understand why you are doing this mistake. So, don't do like that. And then next one is he can able to use for the right hand what is this he can be able he can able to can enable don't go together he can use the right hand or he will be able to use the right hand can will not be used here okay he can use or he will be able to use anything is okay. But you cannot use can and able to get there is a very big mistake and then he can use for his right hand what is this he can use for his right hand he can use his right hand for is not necessary that it will be subside it will subside or it will be subsided there d it will subside it will subside or it will be subsided. So, be careful when you're using b b means you have to use third form it will be subsided. Next one avoid repeating words number of times they are using. How does that sound? Okay? Like that one here is repeating the same times so avoid repeating those tiles next to a no need to be worry. No need to be worried no need to worry or no need to be worried. D when you use B your use of tariffs are worried worried worried. Okay, no need to worry or no need to be worried. No need to worry or no need to be worried. be worried. Who are you a worry So like that you are to speak and you are doing number of you're taking number of passes and breaks, unnecessary sounds are there grammar and vocabulary some mistakes are there I have shown you now, and pronunciation is good, but fluency and accuracy are missing. So focus on fluency and accuracy. And every speaking, I am recording and I am putting it in the telegram channel. So why don't you go there, take the recording, listen to the audios, I am giving lot of feedback. So take those feedback sessions and write down the sentences which I am giving you, for example, you said there is nothing to worry instead of that one thing, this is a common thing children when they are young, like when they are six years old, or below 10 years old, it is a common tendency to cut their hands or fingers or somewhere whenever they get a sharp object into their hands. And that is the that is normal. So you cannot always be careful. Sometimes there may be some problems like this one, so many people face this problem. And you are one of them. Because you're a mother, you're worried about the bleeding the condition, you're worried about the scarring and all these problems. Of course, I can understand I totally agree with you being a mother it is painful for you to adjust to the situation. Yes, we are you are in safe hands your child will be taken care of and the necessary treatment will be provided. And you need not worry at all. So now this is the way how I have spoken. But did you speak like that? No, definitely no. You spoke something 20% of you spoke well, definitely. But you could have spoken like this using all the explanation. Is that clear? Rajalakshmi whenever I give you speeding sessions for everyone, I'll give like this one. So you can take those things, those things and you can use them Okay. Was this was the explanation was the feedback beneficial for you?NR NURSE RAJYA LAKSHMI 12:15 Yes, sir. It is useful and a treat for me.IG INTERLOCUTOR GRANDMASTER 12:19 Yeah, don't be offended. Don't be upset because I'm giving too many corrections. And I'm giving lots of explanation. Don't be offended. Try to learn because it is very important that you learn okay. Yes, yes, sir. Thank you. Thank you.
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