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723.Ms Patricia Styles - Nurse - OET - Writing - QualityCheck -Telgi Balan -Kochin - Kerala - India

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723. Ms Patricia Styles - Nurse -Kochin - Kerala - India

Telgi Balan - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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1. The Consultant

Emergency Department


2. The next day (and not "on next day")


3. *...she was discharged (and not she "got discharged")


4. ... she was discharged with home nursing assessment.


5. During follow-up home visit today, I found her... (here list the symptoms noticed by the home nurse.)


6. She is suspected to have complications of pericarditis and is being transferred to your hospital.

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