
723. Ms Patricia Styles - Nurse -Kochin - Kerala - India
Telgi Balan - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing
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Emergency Department
2. The next day (and not "on next day")
3. *...she was discharged (and not she "got discharged")
4. ... she was discharged with home nursing assessment.
5. During follow-up home visit today, I found her... (here list the symptoms noticed by the home nurse.)
6. She is suspected to have complications of pericarditis and is being transferred to your hospital.
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