691. Ernest Ntahane - Nurse - Durban - South Africa

MS Sally Brown - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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1. Use the same date format throughout the letter.

2. Ms Sally Brown

3. Ms Brown presented today with....

4. It was seven days before that a cat had scratched her.

5. The scratch was red and there was pus formation.

6. She was prescribed ciprofloxacin 500 mg...

7. As for Ms Brown's social history, she is a student.

8. Ms Brown's

9. Remove "Worth to note".

10. regarding Ms Brown

11. Yours faithfully