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694. Mr Beverly Williams - Nursing - OET - Writing - QualityCheck - Prabhjeet Kaur - Amritsar -India

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694.Mr Beverly WilliamsMr - Nurse -Amritsar - India

Prabhjeet Kaur - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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1. Dear Ms Mansoura,


2. ...who has had type 2 diabetes mellitus for the past...


3. "prior" health education? What did you mean to express?


4. Mrs Williams has been overweight for the last 30 years...


5. She is non-compliant with diet and medication.


6. neglecting her diabetes ans hypertension


7. Mrs Williams has trouble in reducing body weight.


8. Remove "Well"


9. ...needs to be assessed...


10. ...would be greatly appreciated.

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