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XYZ - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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1. Remove "possible". "Suggestive of" has the same effect as "possible"

2. ... and requires urgent assessment and management...

3. "prior to her present condition" unclear statement.

4. "vitala status". What did you mean by this term?

5. ... for which she is on medications.

6. Ms Styles was admitted to hospital...

7. Investigations were done and management provided for her.

8. She was discharged with home nursing care.

9. Remove "unfortunately".

10. ...Ms Styles' health condition worsened and...

11. Her medication list and lab reports are enclosed herewith.

12. and management of Ms Styles' health condition...