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ORIGINAL ELECTRONIC VERSION

 

Ms Jennifer Adams

Social Worker

Elizabeth Community Health Centre

125 Munno Parra Avanue

Elizabeth

5098


24 October, 2009


Dear Ms. Adams,


RE: Mr. Martin Wilson


I a writing to refer Mr Wilson who is recuperating from the complications after suicide attempt. He requires urgent attention for the follow up care


Mr. Wilson was admitted to the hospital on 13th of this month due to overdose Mogodol. During his hospital stay, he was weak and depressed. He has been treated with anti- depressants. He also diagnosed to have type II diabetes. He is able to use wheelchair from 20t of this month.


Mr Wilson who is a retired bookkeeper, lives with his wife and son. He drinks alcohol daily and addicted to gambling. Depression developed due to gambling addiction and he lost his for that reason.


It would be greatly appreciated if you could monitor the follow up care for Mr. Wilson. He requires gambling addiction therapy and it is important to encourage him to join gambling addiction action group at Elizabet community center. He might require the wheelchair for another one week and frame can be used for walking. Importantly, please motivate him to involve social sporting activities such as lawn bowls.


Please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further queries


Yours sincerely,

Registered Nurse

Lyell McEwin Hospital

 

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  1. Where is the recipient's address?

  2. Re: Mr Martin Wilson, aged 62

  3. I am writing to refer Mr Martin Wilson who is recuperating after an attempted suicide. He is under treatment for depression due to gambling addiction. He needs follow-up care and support from you following his discharge today.

  4. following a suicide attempt using Magadol overdose

  5. He was also diagnosed to have...

  6. Currently he mobilises on a wheelchair and will need to use it for one more week.

  7. He is a heavy smoker and a social drinker.

  8. He lost a lot of money gambling and is in debt.

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