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1. Ms Bell needs ongoing care and support from the community nurse, is my opinion, not "overall lifestyle changes". If she needs support from a social worker and if we expect the community nurse to arrange it, this can be stated in a separate sentence.

2 ....non-insulin-dependent (hyphenation)

3. Why did you leave out Augmentin Duo Forte?

4 ...she was admitted to hospital...

5. One month ago? No, it wasn't. Mention the exact date.

6. ..therefore she was initiated on antibiotic therapy which needs review on completion of course.

7. ...encourage her to involve in social activities