328.Ms Betty Johnson-Doctor-OET-Writing-QualityCheck-Thushiyanthi Shivakanthan-Trincomalee-Sri Lanka

328. Ms Betty Johnson - Doctor - Trincomalee -Sri Lanka
Thushiyanthi Shivakanthan - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing
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1. Private Practice
2. Space after Re:
3. Follow the same date format throughout the letter.
4. Full stop after osteoarthritis. She is being discharged today and needs follow-up care from you.
5. ....except hemoglobin level which had dropped to 80 g/L and became normal after blood transfusion.
6. Remove then. She was commenced on...
7. Why is In addition hyphenated?
8. She was encouraged to mobilise using cruthches and was commenced on gentle exrecises.
9. dressing
10. hospital stay
11. On discharge today...
12. ...with home nursing care
13. It would be greatly appreciated...
14. ... in one week's time...
15. two weeks' time...