328. Ms Betty Johnson - Doctor - Trincomalee -Sri Lanka

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4. Full stop after osteoarthritis. She is being discharged today and needs follow-up care from you.

5. ....except hemoglobin level which had dropped to 80 g/L and became normal after blood transfusion.

6. Remove then. She was commenced on...

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8. She was encouraged to mobilise using cruthches and was commenced on gentle exrecises.

9. dressing

10. hospital stay

11. On discharge today...

12. ...with home nursing care

13. It would be greatly appreciated...

14. ... in one week's time...

15. two weeks' time...