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BRUCE BREW - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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This is not a referral letter.

It's a transfer letter.

Who was diagnosed

He is set to be transferred

To hospital

If you are telling about the same year, no need to add year.

He has swallowing difficulty for the past ...

He appeared

Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly, therefore etc.)

Avoid repitation

Mr Brew lives

Which has been treated

He may need