292. FARIDA PK - Nurse - OET-Writing - QualityCheck - BRUCE BREW
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292. FARIDA PK - - Nurse -
BRUCE BREW - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing
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This is not a referral letter.
It's a transfer letter.
Who was diagnosed
He is set to be transferred
To hospital
If you are telling about the same year, no need to add year.
He has swallowing difficulty for the past ...
He appeared
Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly, therefore etc.)
Avoid repitation
Mr Brew lives
Which has been treated
He may need
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