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292. FARIDA PK - Nurse - OET-Writing - QualityCheck - BRUCE BREW

 
 

292. FARIDA PK - - Nurse -

BRUCE BREW - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

Registered - Regular Student - GrandMasterClass

 

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This is not a referral letter.

It's a transfer letter.


Who was diagnosed


He is set to be transferred


To hospital


If you are telling about the same year, no need to add year.


He has swallowing difficulty for the past ...


He appeared


Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly, therefore etc.)


Avoid repitation


Mr Brew lives


Which has been treated


He may need

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