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289. IRAM SHEHZADI - Nurse - OET-Writing - QualityCheck - ANDREW O' CONNOR

 
 

289. IRAM SHEHZADI - - Nurse -

ANDREW O' CONNOR - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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Special Suggestions for Quality Enhancement ...

 

I am referring (you can easily save two words)


Who is recuperating



a stroke



At his home


Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly, therefore etc.)



at the time of discharge, (needed a comma)


His progress was slow


Avoid writing unnecessary information


Avoid writing all relevant information in one sentence as a request. Connect information logically.


Follow up information and timing can be separated into another paragraph

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