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287. TINCY THOMAS - Nurse - OET-Writing - QualityCheck - MARIA SANTINI

 
 

287. TINCY THOMAS - - Nurse -

MARIA SANTINI - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

Registered - Regular Student - GrandMasterClass

 

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Special Suggestions for Quality Enhancement ...

 

I am referring (you can easily save two words)


No need of a comma before secondary to


SENTENCE needs to be completed

I am referring who........into your care for reason .



...a six week history of joint pain.


..and performing daily living activities. ( Parallelism error)



MRI ...universal abrevaiations can be used in the letters.


She is depressed..


...if you could assess Mrs Santhini and provide....

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