285. RANI KURIAN - - Nurse -

BRUCE BREW - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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... letter is to transfer Mr Brew

. He requires..

Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly etc.)

And & as well as are not interchangeable

Which confirmed the diagnosis.

A family history of cancer

Admit

This last paragraph is important for the urgent assessment so that should be in the second paragraph.