282. JISHA VARGHESE - Nurse -

HARRY KOVACS - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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If the patient is aged below 17, you can use the patient's first name.

Harry.

On observation, (needed a comma)

and is socially withdrawn.

Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly etc.)

first letter of the names should be capitalized.

Elizabeth