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280. LIGY SIBI - Nurse - OET-Writing - QualityCheck - SHEILA CARTWRIGHT

 
 

280. LIGY SIBI - - Nurse -

SHEILA CARTWRIGHT - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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I am referring (you can easily save two words)


Sentence continuation problem in the introduction.

She requires...


No need a comma before for which


Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly, therefore etc.)



In the left foot or in her left foot


Avoid phrases like apart from that.

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