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I am referring (you can easily save two words)

Sentence continuation problem in the introduction.

She requires...

No need a comma before for which

Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly, therefore etc.)

In the left foot or in her left foot

Avoid phrases like apart from that.