648.Ms Mary Bell - Nursing - OET - Writing -QualityCheck - Shobhanan Sunitha - Nurse - Kerala -India

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1. Dear Nurse,

2. ...recovering after...

3. However, she is anxious about her post-discharge care.

4. She was seen by the dietician who has advised her to follow a low-calory, low-cholesterol, high-protein, gluten-free diet as well as increased fluid intake.

5. ...has a history of coronary...

6. Her ongoing medications are...

7. She leads a sedentary lifestyle.

8. Remove "due to hearing loss".