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293. JINU SHAJU - Nurse - OET-Writing - QualityCheck - BRUCE BREW


293. JINU SHAJU - - Nurse -

BRUCE BREW - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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This is not a referral letter.

It's a transfer letter.

Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly, therefore etc.)

No need a semicolon before which

He has a family history

Consuming alcohol

Which includes

And & as well as are not interchangeable

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