284. NISHA SASIDHARAN - Nurse -

RYAN AND ROHAN - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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Date format( British):

00 January 0000 ( no need a comma)

No need a comma before to refer

Sentence continuation problem in the introduction.

They require an immediate management.

8th January is enough if this happened in the same year.

Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly etc.)

avoid including unnecessary information

He has been antibiotic therapy.

No need a comma before for which and in which