
281. LEEMA PAUL - Nurse -
SANDRA PETERSON - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing
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Sentence continuation problem in the introduction.
. He requires...
Start the sentence with a capital letter.
Initially,
Avoid using unnecessary information
He was admitted to hospital with complaints of.....
Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly etc.)
Mr X has moderate dementia, hypertension....
Medication repitation.
Yours ...Y capital
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