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281. LEEMA PAUL - Nurse - OET-Writing - QualityCheck - SANDRA PETERSON

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281. LEEMA PAUL - Nurse -

SANDRA PETERSON - Case Notes - Nursing - Writing

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Sentence continuation problem in the introduction.

. He requires...


Start the sentence with a capital letter.


Initially,


Avoid using unnecessary information


He was admitted to hospital with complaints of.....


Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly etc.)



Mr X has moderate dementia, hypertension....


Medication repitation.


Yours ...Y capital

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