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Sentence continuation problem in the introduction.

. He requires...

Start the sentence with a capital letter.

Initially,

Avoid using unnecessary information

He was admitted to hospital with complaints of.....

Avoid using or double check before using unnecessary connectors. ( Subsequently, in addition, of note, please note, consequently, kindly etc.)

Mr X has moderate dementia, hypertension....

Medication repitation.

Yours ...Y capital